
manicured perfectly
prize-winning roses planted in a row
lush bushes trimmed just so
not an aspiration too high, or a limb too low
A perfect scene, an impressive show
the keepers keep pruning and perfecting
as their pride and ambition grows
Until that day, when the winds brought a change –
one of the keepers noticed something strange
What is that? A blade out of place?
How can that be? I’ve done everything perfectly!
Rip it from the root! Don’t leave a trace!
What began as one unruly blade –
a thorn in his side – quickly multiplied
attempting to destroy the enviable scene
manicured perfectly
Less time sipping lemonade
near uniform blades
more time plucking and pulling
manicured perfection he was
trying to maintain
What grew outside also grew within
no end to the unwanted shoots,
his frustrated thoughts, or his unruly hairs
hence the season of plucking and pulling began
a season of discontent for the exhausted man
attempting to remain
manicured perfectly
Until that day, when the winds brought a change –
standing in the middle of the street
manicured perfectly
he screamed, I am done plucking and pulling!
Let nature be what it wants to be
and that includes me!
It did not take long for nature to accept his invitation
wild now grows where it was once plucked and pulled
into submission
The manicured grass seeds, brought over on a boat,
without his constant pruning, on their coddled nature,
they choked
The off-colored blades were
sunflowers and wildflowers trying to blend
without his constant pruning, the freed seeds
jumped the street and climbed over fences
taking over entire neighborhoods
defenseless to stop nature’s prowess
With his prized perfection
now a disintegrating dream,
the wild and unmanicured man
stood in the overgrown street
kissed the center of a sunflower
and shouted,
We are free!


Interesting thoughts can come from noticing an odd blade of grass. 🤔 The inspiration for poetry is everywhere! Thank you for visiting and listening to my poetic story. Be well. Be wild! 💗 Michele
Thank you to J Re Crivello with Masticadores Brasil, for publishing my post, “Let Your Spirit Take Flight.” 🦅 Another thank you to those who have taken the time to review my poetry collections. I was recently reading my Amazon reviews, which I have not done in a while, and noticed a few new ones. I am grateful to everyone who has taken the time to purchase, read, and review my collections, illustrated by my daughter, Sammi Lee. I do my best to write reviews of books I have read; I know it can be difficult to squeeze one more thing into a busy schedule. If you are interested in reading my reviews, check out my Being a Woman Poetry Collections Page. 🙏🏻
Find my photos, reels, and micropoetry on IG – @mlsefton
Photo 1: by rawmn Photo 2: by Mathias De Coensel
© 2022 Michele Lee Sefton
Wonderful, Michele! I’ve no time for neatly-manicured gardens 😅😉
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Thank you, Ingrid! I am glad you enjoyed my manicured man poem. 😆 Bravo! There are more important things in life. 😁😅
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Definitely! 😅
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Free at last! 😋
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😆 Yes! Be free to be – flowers and manicured men!
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Oh my god what a relaxing audible treat!!! I’m kind of emotional, as I love this voice and I was engrossed.
Then a rocky song, love it’s music, is really from 1969?? Wow.
You made my day. I thought enough of internet today, then I saw your blog, I couldn’t resist. Thank you for sharing
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Thank you for your enthusiastic response, Devang! 🙏🏻My voice and that song – a contrast, I suppose. 🎶 A song that has stood the test of time. A great movie too, if you’ve never seen it. I am happy to read I made your day. Wow! That is quite an honor. Thanks again! Enjoy the rest of your weekend. Have some fun!
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I’m definitely spending my Sunday with a smile.
Yes your voice and that song was a contrast. Imagine you reciting your poem in rock style(like that in that song) 😅.
I will check out your IG soon, it will be great to learn from you. 🙇🏻♂️
Keep shining 🌞
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That would be a rockin recitation! Thank you, Devang. 🙏🏻
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Excellent poem. “Heavy Metal Thunder”. Yeah!
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Thank you, Timothy! 🎸🏍️ Yeah! 🙌🏻
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I love it
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Yay! 🙏🏻🌞
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Freedom at last 😂👏🏾👏🏾
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Yes!! 😂 Thank you, RM. 😁
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So awesome post to view and to read , listening your sweet voice of (audio poem ) lovely home ,
Your beautiful photo and the lovely lines all fascinating 🌷🙏♥️👍🏻All The Best wishes dear 😊👏
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You deliver smiles, Thattamma. Thank you for your sweet vibes and for your comment about my voice. 💖 The photo is lovely – it is not mine. 😊 Sending you wonderful weekend wishes! 🌞🌻
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There sitting is you, see your post again 😍👍🏻
So welcome and Happy weekend wishes to you dear too 💕
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Oh, that home. Me in my office. I see, yes. 😂 Thank you, Thattamma! You are a sweetheart. 🌼💗
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😊🍎🌸♥️
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I like your poem. No pristine garden here! : )
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Thank you, Rebecca. 🌞 I am glad you enjoyed my poem. I have seen your nature photos… all beautiful! Natural landscapes are beautiful! 🌻
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Great thoughts Michele, we do need to enjoy our life not be tied down to it! I love that song, it was my favourite song when I was about 13 years old, so long ago, thanks for the memories 🙂
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Thank you very much. I appreciate it. Great thoughts from you too! A wonderful sentiment and words to live by and you clearly live by them based on the adventures you two have. I love following your trips, through words and photos! It is a great song! Thank you for joining me and singing along. 😁
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This is so funny because at times I can be so anal-retentive when it comes down to manicuring my lawn and yard. I guess I look at balancing nature, and nature is far from that girlfriend. LOL 🤩💖😊🌺😍 What a poignant reminder and a great musical accompaniment! Enjoy the rest of your weekend my sweet friend. 👏🏼🥂😘
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This was a funny poetic story that spilled out of me yesterday. I don’t question or hesitate for too long – I just let the poem have its way. And the wildflowers too! 🌻💗🌼I applaud your work – pristine lawns take a lot of work! Gardens do too. Worth it though. I do love the idea of fields of wildflowers and sunflowers, but even those can require work, especially where I live. 🌵 Cheers to nature, however it shows up! 🥂🌞 Thank you, Kymbelina. Wishing you a wonderful weekend too! 💃🏽💞💃🏻
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Oh how I appreciate your talents and foresight my dear dancing queen. 💃🏼 When a poem hits you at that unexpected moment, you gotta follow it and go with the flow. .😊💖😍 The emotion is there for the taking my friend. And you took it! Bravo!!! 👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼 Here’s to a FANtabulous weekend as always!!! 💐🔮🥰🌳🦋😊💜✨🤩💖😘💋
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Going with the poetic flow. I absolutely agree! ✍🏻✨ Thank you, Kym, for bringing your fun, compassionate, and dancing self! 😘🤗 A gift! 💝
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Whoooohooooo Michele. You brought the fun first, and I just rolled with it. Hugs and smooches. 😍💐😘💋🤩✨😊
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What a glorious poem about all that is within. I adore how you’ve taken that blade of grass and used it as a seed for consciousness and our ability to go within, and find new directions, new choices. Amazing poem, Michele. I love it. Happy Saturday! 💞🦋🌳
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Wow! 🤩 An impressive interpretation of my manicured poem. 💖 I think your interpretation is more elevated than my poem, but I graciously accept your summary and say thank you. 🙏🏻Yes, it is! Happy Saturday to you too, Jeff! 🌳🌻🌞
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You’re most welcome, Michele. Always. 💖 It’s your poem that showed me the insight. It so much fun. Ah, thank you! It’s sunny here, which is so nice. 🌞🌳🌼
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Melodic voice, wonderful poem. Happy weekend Michele! 💖
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That is a lovely comment. 💖 Thank you, VG. Happy weekending! 🌞
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What a marvelous poem, Michele! And the video brings back so many memories. 1969 was such a creative year. And you’re such a creative woman! Have a great weekend.
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Thank you very much, Dawn. How kind you are! 1969 – 🌈☮️✌🏻 My weekend is off to a lovely start. Wishing the same for you. 🌻🌞🌻
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What a delightful post! I love how it erupts from this small piece of grass and influences the evolution of something bigger and different in humanity. I feel like the return to ‘wild’ is a fitting end and, though it is often viewed as the end of civilization, I feel it is the beginning. ❤
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Thank you, Jaya! Knowing how connected you are to your natural surroundings; I appreciate your feedback. That and your ability to beautifully summarize what I have written are special moments of writing reflection and connection for me. 💖🙏🏻
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❤️❤️❤️
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What a wonderful poem! I love this. And how did you know I love Steppenwolf? Another great post.
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Thank you, Nico! I am pleased to read you enjoyed this post. 🙏🏻 Lucky guess, I guess. 😆
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Fantastic, Michele – I love this!
❤
David
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Thank you for loving my poem! 💖Also for highlighting standout lines, David. 🙏🏻 I find that interesting. ✨
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I really enjoyed your audio poem. Nice to hear your voice. Those manicured lawns and gardens. I am always amazed in Florida how much manicuring they do . Every hedge is electrically snipped into submission. Maybe it is because of the climate . Here in the north we have a winter where nothing grows. So there is a natural break in the need for activity to suppress the growth. Anyway.. nice poem and I love the guy with the tousled hair and sunflowers!
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Thank you, Anne. I am so glad you enjoyed my poem, voice, and the sunflower man. He seems happy. I suppose standing in a sunflower field will do that to a person. 🌻 The Valley of the Sun has too much grass, for the desert climate, in my opinion, but lawns are popular. They are nice for kids, of course. Many golf courses too!
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A very thoughtful and thought-provoking poem, Michele. Perfect is really a killer when carried to extreme. Even weeds have beauty all their own!
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Thoughtful and thought-provoking. I like that! Thank you, Dwight. Perfect quotes about perfection and weeds. 😁
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You are welcome! I enjoyed your post!
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Oh this poem is delightful and beautifully meaningful! All the manucuring out there and within is such tedious work indeed! The ease and joy of allowing nature to take over is truly adventurous when totally in awe of how much it does take over 🙂
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Thank you, Pragalbha! I appreciate your sentiment and your visit. 🙏🏻I imagine our world, both outwardly and inwardly, would look very different if nature was allowed to be and expand, rather than being clipped and controlled. The subject of make-believe! 😁
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The seeds of creative writing sown, now shown flowing freely from a blade of grass into a sunny, golden field. Yours are wonderful words, wild with imagination in poetry cultivated only as you can! Lovely, Michele. ✍🏼🌞🌹
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That is a lovely one-sentence summary. ✨ Thank you for that, Phil, and for your gracious compliment. 🙏🏻🌞🌻
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Most welcome, my friend ~ thank you. 🙏🏻😊
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infinite wisdom in your poem Michele blooming hope of acceptance in the gifts of nature free and easy. I am enjoying my “no mo” lawn of “perfection” among the unruly of my garden contrast I must admit. 💖💖
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I am touched by your lovely comment, Cindy. Blooming hope of acceptance – that is beautiful. Thank you! Enjoy the “no mo” easy life! haha I know how busy you are. 💖🌞
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You are most welcome Michele! Your work opened space to share. Thanks for that .. thanks a little can’t hurt anything!! 💖
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Such a well manicured poem! I love it.
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Well said! 😁 Thank you, Geoff!
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To watch a garden being tended with chemical herbicides, pesticides and fertizer is to realize how we are destroying the soil. The beauty of the wilderness becomes something we seek, yet it could be just outside our doors. We also behave like this towards each other at times, the setting up of neighbourhoods that become isolated as communities, through wealth, race, religion or whatever.
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David, I greatly appreciate your insightful perspectives. 🙏🏻 Thank you for taking the time to share them; in doing so you have extended the conversation in a most meaningful way.
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Beautiful!
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Thank you! 🌻🌞🌻
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this gave me so much joy, listening… brought me in…. freedom is something , that part about the pulling and plucking…ha, oh yes! Beautiful photo as well 💙😊
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I am so delighted to share joy with you. Thank you, poetess Krissy! 💖 Exhausting work, all that pulling and plucking! 😆
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😍😂😊🌹💜💙 yes it is… worth it lol
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Wonderful metaphor. I kept thinking of it as a metaphor for your writing journey, but then I am so blinded by the light of our writing. 🙂 Keep writing, my friend!!
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Lovely to read you, Sandra! It is an extended metaphor, but not for my writing. Poetry offers many gifts, including different interpretations for different readers. Thank you, I will. You too! ✍🏻
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I’ve loved to hear your delightful voice and read your poem, dear Michele!🌷🌻🥰 writing from a unique perspective, this particular poem from you is full of life and rich in stories! I admire how you turn the smalls of life into a beautiful melody with poetic flares. 💗your photo is also grace and beauty combined! 🌷💕
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I love your visits. 💗 Thank you, Miss Annabel. ✍🏻🩰 This particular poem was an interesting one. I never know where the lines will take me, but I enjoy the journey! Especially, when the writing journey leads me to a street overgrown with sunflowers. 🌻🌻🌻 Have a wonderful day beautiful dancer! 🤗🌞💐
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Thank you, Michele!💗 yes, not knowing and letting go the need to control is part of the journey! Yours has led to wonders and beauty 🌷🌻! You too, enjoy a beautiful week!
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The journey to become planted and to be tenderly looked after… how did we get here and flourish under such conditions. I am not a prissy person, but my caretaker is…lol….
You have a way of shaping your storytelling poetry that grabs us your readers…thanks
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A captivating intro, Tony. 🪴 haha Always someone or some entity to please. Unless one lives totally off the grid, I suppose. 🤔 I am grateful for your recognition. Thank you very much!
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you are welcome and yes I am glad you are not off the grid…sidenote=carefree and lead to carelessness… you care too much as do I!
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Is that your original quote? It’s good to have carefree days, but I believe you are right and yes, I do care! 😊 Thank you! 🙏🏻
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Yes that is my original quote😎🥳,,, you are most welcome!💐🤗🙏🏼
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Also not to mention…a soft sit with me…poetic voice…
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How lovely. 🙏🏻
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Inspiration, everywhere indeed. The grass is greener, within every blade, of a manicured thought! Nice share!
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Yes! More inspiration and ideas than we have time to ponder and write. Manicured thought – love that! A wonderful one-sentence review of my poem. Thank you, Warren!
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You’re welcome!
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How wonderful, Michele! I remember very well the great film that I saw in the cinema when I was young. I came out of the cinema feeling different – wild, free and awesome. It’s been a long time ago, but every time I hear this song by Steppenwolf, the wonderful feeling comes back.
Nice share, Michele and best to you!!
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I love when we are able to make meaningful connections like the one you described. Thank you, Artist Rosie. 😊 Songs have a way of making and attaching to special memories. Thank goodness for music! And art!! Best to you too. Have a wonderful weekend! 🌞
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Great poem Michele! It is so well written. The tone, the rhythm, the resolution. Just perfect!
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Thank you so much, Constance! I am grateful for your feedback. 😊
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Yes Michelle I felt this poem! Love your audios so much
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I love reading that you “felt” that poem. It was an interesting and surprising one to write. Thank you very much, Belladonna!
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i the slob
with pt job
share to care
and look around’
to see who s watching
anywhere everywherez!
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Thanks for sharing! 👍🏻
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never could master audio poetry
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No mastery with me either. I just keep practicing. 😁
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where s the fun in that? just do it and que sera
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