
feet that once stumbled in the darkness
made swift and spirited by the glow
cast from red hot sparks
His hands built ovens that pumped air and purified ore
a lone artist on the edge of civilization
he transformed blazing metal
into purposeful and beautiful
His hands piloted a ship designed to push boundaries
stirring inspiration, excitement, and imagination
touching the surface and holding the truth
of a destination others can only dream
His hands have welded thousands of bridges
careful attention to a strong foundation
skillfully laying stones or filling holes
expanding worlds for those
wanting to roam
His hands
the creator of fire
the shaper of iron
the lunar holder
the bridge builder
are gentle too
Delicately, a buttoned blouse
he attempts to undo
gently… gently… GENTLY
Oh, to hell with this!
His hands are no match
for tiny buttons and clasps
the scene quickly deflating
His hands
he throws up (in the air)
His hands
know how to tear


Thank you for visiting and reading! Be well. π Michele
A special thank you to Juan with Gobblers Masticadores (Spain) for publishing my piece, “Sirious Crush (follow-up)“

Β© 2022 Michele Lee Sefton
Photo 1: by zlikovec Photo 2: by Alones
I love how versatile those hand are. Wonderful juxtaposition.
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Great versatility and great symbolism. β¨ Thank you very much, Pat.
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Wonderful hand poem.
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ππ» Thank you, Timothy.
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Is it hot in here, or is it just me? π
Thanks, Michele, for sharing another wonderful piece of your writing. π
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π This poem is abundant in its fire element, yes. β€οΈβπ₯ Thank you, Art; it was my pleasure. π
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Yes, for sure–plenty of fire element! You’re very welcome, Michele!
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Lovely verse Michele. I’m enjoying your playful and passionate theme lately. Maybe they will motivate me to feed my passion. π₯π
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Thank you, Brad. I am happy to read you are enjoying and gleaning motivation from my playful and passionate writing vibes. I enjoy feeling and writing them. βπ»π
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So wonderful hand poem π·πππ»hands are for helping , and the way you wrote the poem is
better way of abundant unique varieties of life πππthank you for sharing with gorgeous
Photo dear yours and happy weekend πβ₯οΈπ
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I appreciate you! Thank you, Thattamma, for your beautiful presence and kind words. Yes, hands hold productivity and passion. π Enjoy your weekend. ππ
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So welcome dear friend π·πβ₯οΈπ·same wishes π
Here now 12:20 am and raining π§ good morning to you π
Iβm going to sleep π
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Good night to you. π
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I like the historic epic poem feel of the poem and the juxtaposition with the aging adventurer’s struggle.
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Excellent! This poem did motivate me to ponder a few historical settings and scenarios. Interesting perspective about the “aging adventurer’s struggle.” I had not considered that, but that is the gift of poetry – poets write and readers experience and interpret. π Thank you, Rebecca.
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Really wonderful!
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It was a wonderful writing experience. π Thank you, Luisa!
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You’re highly welcome, Michele β€οΈπΈβ€οΈ
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Swoon-worthy, Michele π
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Love that! π Thank you, Ingrid.
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This is a wonderful piece of writing. It carried me along the whole way. Or should I say those hands carried me along.
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I treasure your wonderful feedback. Those are some strong hands! Thank you, Anne. π
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Really wonderful!
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Much gratitude to you, Nico. π
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Peace and blessings.
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I am struck by this poem’s tenderness. An absolute pleasure to read!
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I am deeply touched by the interaction you had with this poem. π Thank you.
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Powerful and sensual. The interplay between the two is beautiful, Michele. Have a gorgeous Saturday! πΌπ³π
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Outstanding word choice and description. π Thank you, Jeff. It has been a gorgeous golden day – wishing you the same for your weekend! π³π
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Youβre welcome, Michele. Always. Ah, that reads lovely. Sunny here too. Is wonderful. Thank you! ππ³
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Beautiful poetry Michele! π
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Thanks so much, VG. I appreciate it! π
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Michele, I love your gift of words! It was the perfect balance ~gentle, yet fiercely and fiery topped! πππ
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Thank you, Karla! An uplifting note to start my day. I love your descriptive words! π Hugs to you on this Sunday. π
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Youβre welcome, Michele π hugs back! π
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Great imagery. What a wonderful romantic you are.
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Thank you, Sandra. A little bit, yes. ππ
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His hands are warm. I can tell.
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I believe so! Fire contained in those hands and heart. π Thank you, Selma.
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Beautiful tender buildup coupled with that eager impatience later. Wonderful descriptions sprinkled throughout β€
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A gorgeous description of my poem. π I did delight in the writing. Thanks, Tom. Much gratitude to you.
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Hands can do so much…
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Amazing, isn’t it?
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It really is when you think about it. Just in what we do with them in a single ordinaly day.
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Love the build up in this poem and then taking it to the funny with a twist. Awesome play with entertainment Micheleβ£οΈ
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Just noticed the reply I sent you did not go through. π Take two. π¬ This poem took me on an interesting journey; I loved every minute of it! π₯° Thank you, Cindy. Apologies for the delayed response. Glitchy system. π
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Thanks for circling back Michele and I totally get it.. It was a fun one Michele and no worries everπ
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Beautiful writing πππ
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Much gratitude to you, Lincol. π
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It is a pleasure.
Best regards.
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This one made me smile! I love the progression of your poem and the switch at the end.
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Made me smile too. π Poems have a way of surprising us sometimes. β¨ Thank you, Dwight!
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I love when they do that!
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This is so good!!!!!!!
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Sexy strong hands are good, yes!!!!! π Thank you, Belladonna. ππ»
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Oh yesss!!!! LOL
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Oo, I so love the strength and delicate power in this poem! The imagery delights and informs and speaks to the feminine in the masculine. β€
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I sure loved writing this one. π I love your description – your noticing of the contrasts. Thank you very much, writer Jaya! π
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