
This suggestion I’d rather
not consider.
Grow old alone;
I could manage just fine.
In love I’d rather
grow young.
Having completed
decades of “to dos” –
to playful mischief let’s say “I do.”
Let’s put on our Sunday best
for no reason at all
and through the park, take a stroll,
leaving others underdressed
and stunned by our youthful glow.
Let’s walk casually and obliviously
toward the nearest puddle
(a large one in front of a crowd will do).
“Surprised” by its sudden appearance,
you’ll pick me up and pretend to carry me across.
Oh, what a gentleman, they will say.
They spoke too soon because in the water
is where you’ll drop me.
Oh, what an ass, their tone will turn.
Not fazed by my soaked stockings,
with my heeled right foot, toward you, water I will thrust.
Stand and take it like a man, you must,
before jumping in.
Let our wet and wild frenzy begin.
Soaked are we, splashing and laughing.
Oh, aren’t they cute, they will bashfully agree.
Dress clothes soaked by a dirty puddle –
no bother.
A puddle on the floor is where our Sunday best
will quickly get tossed.
Let’s spend Sunday undressed,
under the covers,
splashing and laughing.☔😁
Thank you for reading and visiting. Be well. 💗 Michele
Photo: by Renata Apanavicience
© 2022 Michele Lee Sefton
What a delightfully sweet story. 🧚🧚🧚
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It was a delight to write. 🥰 Thank you for reading, Pat.
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I like! Romantic! And funny. And I like the last 3 lines…😊
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Seems a perfect way to spend a Sunday. 😊 Thank you! I saved the best for last. 😁
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Undressed Sunday sounds nice.
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Out of the Sunday best sounds best, yes!
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Fun song by a group I love and the perfect compliment to your fun verse Michele. Do diga diga doo! 😃
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They are fabulous! Very danceable and it felt like the right tone for my Sunday stroll. 🌞 Thank you, Brad. I dig! 😁
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This really made me smile😊
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Yay! Happy to learn that. Thank you! Made me smile too. 😊
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What an enjoyable poem. I got halfway through and then the soccer came on tv 🤣 Hi Michele, hope life’s good for you.
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Was for me too. Thanks, Mr. Bump. ⚽ I understand. Soccer is more exciting than a casual stroll through the park. 😆 Writing. Splashing in puddles. No complaints. 🙏🏻
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So beautiful sweet poem Sunday special 🌷🙏👍🏻 So inspiring lines with lovely younger age
thoughts and memories expressed with wonderful feelings 👏👌✍️ grace wishes dear 💕🌷
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“Sunday special.” Love that! Yes, it is. 🌞 Thank you, Thattamma, for your kind thoughts and ongoing lovely presence. 💖 Happy Sunday to you! 😊
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So welcome and good morning to you 🙏 💕😊🌷
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The fun in the puddles. Turning your back on aging. Great images! Thanks!
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Would be fun! That’s one way to make a splash! 😆 Yes, better to grow young. Thank you, Sandra.
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Dig it, dig it, I do.
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Hot diggity! 🙏🏻
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This poem made me feel so happy. Your ending is perfect in this fun loving poem! 😊❤
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I am so glad to know my happy vibes came through; it was a happy write with a happy ending! 😊 Thank you, Joy. 💗
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Growing young is a concept and practice I love. What other time in life is left to ensure we have let our hearts desire make sweet music to the world? Now or never. A gorgeous Saturday read. Thank you, Michele! 🌳💖
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A wonderful practice to live by, Jeff. Bravo! Live it up, now! Seize the day! 😄 I am glad you enjoyed my poem. 💖 I sure had fun! Happy Sunday to you. 🍂
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Love this so much. The conversation in it is divine!! Bravo!
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I feel the love! 💖 Thank you very much, Jessica. I do have fun with all the voices in my head. 😆 Writing offers many gifts. 😊
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It sure does. You are very talented!!!❤️❤️
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Thanks, Jessica. You’re very generous.
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Wonderful indeed.
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Thank you, Nico. 😊
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A lot of fun 🙂
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Absolutely, yes! Fun to the nth degree! 😁 Thank you, Rebecca. Hope your poetry prompt went well. I look forward to reading your responses.
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Thanks, Michele. Good turn out, now to play with translations!
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Yes to all of this – especially ‘growing young together.’ Anyone who hasn’t had this experience should certainly give it a try!
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Your “yes” to growing young is beautiful to behold! 💞 Thank you, Ingrid. 😊
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Oh how I love that Big Band sound Michele, but I don’t think I’ve heard this particular song before. But honey, I don’t have to tell you that my hips and feet are doing a little bit more than simply swaying! 🤣😜😂 LOL 💃🏼🎺🎵🎷🎶🎸💃🏽
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It is fabulous! 🎶 I love it too! 🎷 Can’t sit still with that song on, or most others. 😆 Right, Dancing Diva? 💃🏻💖💃🏽 Happy Sunday to you, Kymbelina. Hope it’s a fun day! 🌞
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Girlfriend, you have me grinning from ear to ear. Thank you for being such a bright spot our world so desperately need…and dancing certainly helps that part! 😜🌟🤩 Cha-cha-cha 💃🏼👯♀️💃🏽 Hugs and smooches. 😘💖🤗
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Thank you! You’re a bright spot too! ✨
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Awwww…🥰🦋😘
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Diga Diga 💦 well written 🙂
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Thank you, VG! 😄 I am glad you enjoyed my poetic story.
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Michele this was beautiful anode everything fit so well with your beautiful line, “grow young together”. Love this!
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Inspiring and aspirational lines. Thank you, Belladonna. I am glad you enjoyed my poem. I loved writing it. 💗
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It was beautiful!
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🙏🏻😊
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Age is just statistics, love has no age. We are never too old to be young – we are never too old to love. 😀
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Beautifully said. Love has no limits. 💞 Thank you, LDN. 😊
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What a fun play with words and such a happy ending too. I bet your home and environment are always filled with life’s adventures. Never a boring moment in that environment either, I can just tell from this post alone. The artist in you is so full of happy energy, just have to let it all out to share, can’t hold that in.
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The happy energy flowing from your comment is equally enchanting. 💖 Thank you very much! I can say with certainty; I am never bored. 😁 Best to you!
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The music is a great component to your poem. Such a fun and joyful post!
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The song definitely matches the tone and energy of my poetic scene. I am delighted by your response. Thank you! 😊
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Love the poem and the video!
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Thanks, Dawn! I am glad you enjoyed my post. Was a fun write! 💞
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Fun and playful Sundays in puddles are becoming on you, Michelle! Love this concept of life as we grow young!🎉😎😍
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Such fun! Thank you very much, Cindy. 💗
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Lovely! liked the photograph also!!!
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Thank you so much! 😊
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Nicely versed, l agree the last three lines round it all off nicely for a lazy like Sunday morning.
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Nothing like a lazy Sunday. 🌞 The rest is a bonus! 😁 Thank you!
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You are very welcome 🙂
I agree, an easy Sunday always a good thing.
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This was wonderful. I hope it was based on a personal adventure — if not in the past, soon in the future!
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I am so glad you read and enjoyed my Diga Diga Doo inspiration. I sure had fun writing it! 😁 Not too many big puddles where I live, but all things are possible, yes! ✨🙏🏻
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I love the delightful imagery in this poem and how each stanza expands on the visuals and emotion in a natural, lyrical way! ❤
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This was such a fun write for me. 😊 Thank you, Jaya, for enjoying it and adding your special commentary. 💗
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I love this ! We need to play more and always stay “young in love” regardless of age 🙂
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I loved writing it! 💞 Thank you for joining me! 😊 I wholeheartedly agree. 🥰
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